
Listen closely to this verse from “Make You Feel My Love”
When the evening shadows and the stars appear
And there is no one there to dry your tears
I could hold you for a million years
To make you feel my love
And there is no one there to dry your tears
I could hold you for a million years
To make you feel my love
Something sneaky to the ear is going on here. When I initially heard the first line I thought “shadows” was a verb, as if the evening shadows something, but “and” joins “shadows” to “the stars” making that impossible. “appears”/”tears”/years” are the rhyming words. But “stars appear” with “your tears” does something else for the ear. I think it’s the t in “stars” as well as the r that accompanies the r in “your” and the t in “tears” that gives it a sing-ability, a tonal unity good for the singer, good for the listener, and distant for the reader.
As Christopher Ricks says, “Every song, by definition, is realized only in performance.” I think this can be said of this verse–listen closely to the way Dylan sings it and I think you’ll hear the sounds from those letters mesh into words to create a tone that echoes throughout the song and perhaps the entire cd.